a tough work day over
I rush to only one place
my house in Chi-town
This a Haiku that I wrote. The "I" in this poem is a 30 year-old worker in Chicago. After a tiring day at work, the only thing on his mind is his home, and he "rushes" there and only there. He represents the average, generic worker. This also explains in part why there are "rush hours", as every single worker has the exact same thoughts as the "I" in this poem, thinking of home as a place for relaxation after work.
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simple but great. Showing that after you work you just want to go home and rest. You definitely captured the views of a 30 year old worker. I like the second line alot and hte use of alliteration with only one. Great work!
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